Do you have a script you need notes on?
Let me help you get your script to the next level! Don't wait any longer.
Hello writers! A quick break from our writing prompts to let you know that I also do script consultations, and I have time this week for a few script reads.
My qualifications: I’ve sold over 20 screenplays (12 have been produced, including Abandoned, Radio Rebel, and Another Cinderella Story); I’ve written 14 episodes of television (and received two Emmy nominations for writing); I’ve sold two pilots, as well as developed multiple TV shows with production companies; I received the Humanitas Award for screenwriting and the WGA Award for Best Children’s Script; and I’ve written 8 produced plays, which have garnered the Los Angeles Drama Critics Circle Award for Best Play, as well as numerous other awards and nominations, including the GLAAD Awards, the Ovations Awards, and the Stage Raw Awards. During the pandemic, I created the Pop Prompts book series, which has spawned five books of journaling prompts that use music to help you tap into your creative unconscious mind. And I recently wrote two books for Simon and Schuster, Write a Romantasy: 99 Prompts to Craft a Tale of Heart and Heroism (coming out August 26), and Write a Dystopian Novel: 99 Prompts to Craft a Tale of Ruin and Rebellion (coming out November 25).
Let Me Help You Get Your Script Ready
Do you have a screenplay, pilot script, or play that you need feedback on?
I will read your script and send you 4-6 pages of typed notes within 7 days.
The notes will cover things like character arcs, logic, theme, tone, dialogue, formatting, and cuts.
I will give you my big picture thoughts about the whole script, along with specific page notes.
Then we’ll schedule a 1-hour zoom to discuss the notes in greater depth after you've had time to process them, and I'll answer any follow-up questions you have.
The consultation fee is $400 for a half-hour script (around 30 pages) and $500 for a full-length script (between 50-100 pages, plus $2 per page for anything over 100 pages).
If those rates are out of your price range, I am willing to adjust my rates on a case-by-case basis. Let me know what you can do and we'll see what we can work out!
Email me at erik@erikpatterson.org to book a script consultation!
Testimonials
“My script notes session with Erik was fantastic. I had roadblocks about some major issues with my script, and Erik’s thoughtful notes and commentary provided the insight I needed to revise my way to a much stronger draft. His written notes gave me so much to consider, and I was excited to work my way through them (which writers know is not always the case with notes). The follow up meeting was just as helpful. Erik is awesome to speak with, and was open to answering questions I’ve had for a long time—not only about my script and next steps, but about the industry in general. And feedback from someone who is doing the work and has substantial lived experience is always invaluable. I highly recommend it!” — Kristin Jamberdino
“Erik reviewed a first draft of my screenplay and gave me valuable feedback that is helping me take it to the next level. He has a great eye for plot and character development. He pointed out what was working and what might work better in some places, keeping it constructive and positive while also being incisive in his observations. I tend to have a thin skin, but I didn’t feel bruised. I felt motivated and excited to get going on my next draft.” — Sherry Shiffman
"Erik Patterson is the teacher you've been waiting for. Gentle, guiding, experienced, patient and highly accomplished -- Erik gets you thinking, but more importantly Erik gets you writing. He will pull that idea from you that you'd thought lost forever." — Liza Palmer, author of The F Word



Thank You For Being Here
Pre-order my new books coming soon from Adams Media/Simon and Schuster!
Write a Romantasy! 99 Prompts to Write a Tale of Heart and Heroism
Write a Dystopian Novel! 99 Prompts to Write a Tale of Ruin and Rebellion
Get my prompt books: https://www.camdenhighstreetbooks.com
Attend a writing sprint with me on Zoom: https://www.patreon.com/erikpatterson
Commission a prompt via Cameo: https://www.cameo.com/erikpatterson
Read one of my plays: https://www.camdenhighstreetbooks.com/plays